All Comments on 'Delivery Special Soap'

Really liked the fact that you let the guy live this time around ! Sexy read.

Just lovely... I hope there's more... Thanks

I enjoy all your stories. I always look forward to read more

Boy would it be nice to have Arisa come by and massage all of my stress away. I'm a big fan of your work, and this one seemed to press all of my buttons. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Very well done...

Thank you so much; as said below, it's nice to read a happy ending once in a while, especially when a nice guy is the 'victim'. Just have to hope Orchrhys doesn't come back and check if Arisa finished her meal.

A Succubus Rescue Service is a nice idea and well portrayed; it's in their own best interest to make sure that greedy succubi don't spoil the herd.

Thanks,

I echo others sentiments on it being nice to see a nice guy live. Jerks are the ones who should be drained to death. It makes sense too from a predator/prey perspective. Succubi pretty much function like parasites in that they live off the energy of others, and the majority of real parasites don't kill their hosts or even cause significant impairment unless some other factor changes (like athlete's foot fungus lives on you all the time but only becomes a problem if you don't keep yourself clean). Now you just need to do a story where some type of monster girl and human fall in love and get to be together.

Or rather that is what I'd like you to do. You don't "need" to do anything but write what you want. It would be nice though to have even the soul-eating be written in a less doom-and-gloom way (ceasing to exist is worse than dying, so I prefer the idea of the soul living on in a state of bliss as part of the succubus), but then I guess it would cease to be erotic horror.

I liked this and your "Incall With a Succubus" very much- I find the idea of a cabal of "good" succubi fighting against their natures interesting. Here's hoping for more along the same lines!

Your stories are amazing in their fantastic elements and always an interesting read. Those with happy endings do a great deal to improve my mood.

Most excellent piece of work. Jane Marwood

I enjoy the versatility you express in the ability to write different styles of endings.

Many of the succubus stories the hero dies, the change you brought about makes your stories just that more intense. Just knowing the hero has the slimmest possibility of living, makes the read that much more enjoyable.

Thank you for having the nice guys survive every once and a while.

I look forward to more of Phil and Succubus Summoning.

I really like the fact that he lived this time around. You write really really great stories but all the guys die!

Very nice! Are we ever going to see Orchrhys or another of her type again, or are those dreams all we get to see of how she does things?

The good guy lived! Also, this new "breed" of succubi seem really interesting. As always, your stories are brill and full of new ideas that amaze me everytime!

Awesome Story. Yet another great one from many eyed hydra Keep it up!

I liked the discussion between the two succubi. You draw up such detailed and deeply emersive scenes. I look forward to reading all of your work especially whats to come.

Really enjoyed this story :-)

More like this please :)

Damn, I want Arisa as a girlfriend now.

Very well crafted. Your readers are subject to tension and release just like your characters.

Erotic, irksome, and intriguing.

Lovely story...both in detailed description as well as the great use of words. Thank you for something at a higher level that the often used "fuck'em and suck'em" stories. L

I like how you're never sure if the person will live or die in these stories, always nice when they do though but it makes the read more suspenseful. Hope you do more!

But I love it!

Not a fan at all.

i thought from the beginning that he was going to die. I was pleasantly surprised by the ending.