All Comments on 'Dell's Dad'

Because Johnny's a faggot who really doesn't want you.

But then you already knew that beep down, didn't you?

So dump the wuss, and be a real man's slut.

You know you want to.

The story itself was not so bad except for the scenario being a little too implausible and quick, with no lead-up. My biggest complaint and turn off though was the mention of drugs - not everyone who likes dirty sex is into any form of drugs (Other than caffeine !) so the mention of 'weed' was enough to put me right off.

I'm one of those who thinks all forms of illegal drug use should be jumped on - the users taken away to do hard labour and the importers/dealers to be hanged. If only people had the courage to vote for a government who'd be strong enough !!

Dear kateandjessica

I believe that you should add more chapters to Dell's Dad because this story has potential to being a very good series. I have some ideas on how to expand this great story in potential future chapters. I believe that Jessica should become the personal white cum dump and piss mop for Dell's father and even brother and himself again. Jessica should become a cump dumb for these black men and she should be totally addicted to black cum and she considers it her favourite food and that every day she needs at least a pint of black cum for her to swallow. I also believe that Jessica should become a piss mop where she is happy to be used as a human toilet to drink black piss and considers black piss her favourite drink. I also believe that the black men should become more dominent with her like iforcing her to suck their cocks after they have been in her ass and to lick the shit of it. I also believe she should be called more names like slut, whore, tramp, bitch, cumdump and pissmpo as well for the story. I also believe that Jessica should be loaned by Dell's family to their black friends and get gangbanged by many black men and treated as the dirtiest and nastiest black cum piss slut whore there ever was.

PLEASE CONSIDER WRITING MORE CHAPTERS ABOUT DELL'S DAD AND USING MY IDEAS ON FUTURE CHAPTERS.