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Anonymousalmost 20 years agoGreat story
Loved this story, especially the little twist at the end.
Great description, really felt like I was there.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoDelta Star
Descriptive like the idea of the transformation, didnt see the ending comming
Anonymousabout 19 years agoedit, edit, edit
A well designed story, very sexy, with a clever ending. but your grammar stinks!
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