All Comments on 'Deluxe Pedicure Ch. 03'

I'm enjoying your story. I think your writing has a lot of promise. I particularly appreciate the dialogue between the two cousins and their aunt. The sex scenes are well-done. All in all, very enjoyable. I'll have to check back from time to time looking for future installments and/or stories. Thanks for sharing! Oh .. one other thing I appreciated was your grammar and spelling. Nothing particularly stood out as being in error. I can't tell you how often "taut" turns up as "taught", etc.

[Gualterio]

Hope you update soon!

A very enjoyable read. I like that you're taking your time with this and that it's not a wham-bam-thank you-ma'am kind of story. I look forward to seeing what happens next.