All Comments on 'Demands'

I think this should be in the non-erotic section.

with a very surprising ending! I was expected him to set some traps for her and even to file the divorce papers. In fact his analysis of the fact that she did want to screw some particular other man sounded good to me and was probably good enough reason to divorce her. If he loved her too much for this he should have at least twisted her tail a bit more and tried to find out who she was thinking about.... But it distracted me! Thanks.

...the possibility of her having other reasons for her actions? You mentioned she wasn't stupid and suspected there was more to her demands but never went further with the explanation. I always enjoy your stories but you left something out here. Is there a chapter 2 coming?

I agree with your assesment of her persona to the degree that something wasn't right and it has gone unattended...what next?

Not up to your usual standards. As already mentioned something is missing, perhaps left out unintentionally, regarding wife and what her plan actually was. First time ever being disappointed with your work.

And what ever happened to the Winterfrog who usually beats the piss out the asshole who tried to fuck Isabell? LOL

I usually enjoy Winterfrog's stories and characters but this one was not very good. The plot was fine but the conclusion was very shallow and left too many questions.

Decent story, but not great.

I always enjoy your stories because they are not always predictable, and because they usually fully develop both the characters and the plot.<p>

This story, however, simply left too many unanswered questions. The story ended too casually and left a feeling of unresolved conflict.

Thanks again for a different look at marriage across the pond. FYI, it's "the grass is greener on the other side of the fence". I always appreciate your stories.

-Ttom

the reason is that the husband actually focuses on what the wife actions/ demands MEAN...

HOW his wife could of so easily believe such 2nd hand rummors and not bother to check out these " stories' in any manner whatsoever...

of course the author does NOT follow up since the story ended so short.

The Husband's Response: Filling out the Paperwork and letting the "chips" fall where ever they Fell.

as soon as Wifey found out Hubby would'nt be bullied then it was time.

to do Damage Control by admitting her Sillyness.

and then to Take both old boyfriend and slut Girlfiend for Money they Basically lost all of their "Leverage".

Good Story.

Just another story for small dicked wimps who need to fantasize about being a big tough guy. Please stop writing stories.

Isabell was definitely looking to see if the grass was greener on the other side of the fence. No research just her demand of either or. He really had her backpeddling. Really nice story and enjoyed the way the husband went around questioning those involved and then talking with his cousin. Nicely written tale. Thanks for sharing.

Easy reading and interesting to read. Enjoyable story. Thanks

a lot better than most on here, at least no wimps allowed with the "Frog". Thanks.

Well done

He shut her accusations and demands down immediately. Might have worked even if he had cheated! Best defense has always been a good sudden offense! In any case he shut down her thinking that she had a good excuse to play herself as payback. I have read many stories on this site where the wife goes off the deep end when someone tells her the husband cheated and/or provides a doctured up photo. Some of them pretty drastic...

Great story and any cheating was prevented.

between Offense and Defense,,,,,,sometimes its a toss-up, TK U MLJ LV NV

Always a good read.

The story had the makings of a wife on a slippery slope with overt assertion to cheat. Her husbands bold move to suppress her efforts saved their marriage and their dignities.

Well done. Nice flow to the story, fine wordsmithing, good intrigue.

Thank you.

when someone says I heard if from ??, tell them what you heard ?? 1st liar usually doesn't stand a chance, TK U MLJ LV NV

It doesn't seem believable that he would just trust her,that is just too stupid.

Stupid is as stupid does.

I sure do like your stories. They are a refreshing departure from the usual loving wife stories. Please keep on writing

which leads on to believe. TK U MLJ LV NV

Indeed there are many stupid people in the world. A wife behaving as this one did was believably stupid in only a way that a woman can be stupid. The idea of forcing her husband to accept cheating is very similar to the many things wives force their husbands to accept by holding the threat of punishment over their heads. There was no mention of children, the only reason to get married and to stay married, so I was very disappointed when they did not get divorced. Who needs this kind of shit? Who can trust a person that would threaten you like this? Who can be foolish enough to think that this moron grade wife wouldn't do something equally stupid or worse in the future?

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Stupid People

Indeed there are many stupid people in the world. A wife behaving as this one did was believably stupid in only a way that a woman can be stupid. The idea of forcing her husband to accept cheating is very similar to the many things wives force their husbands to accept by holding the threat of punishment over their heads. There was no mention of children, the only reason to get married and to stay married, so I was very disappointed when they did not get divorced.

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The first sentence:

living in a Scandinavian town with our two kids

She had that to hold over him.

because law-suits leave them destitute, TK U MLJ LV NV

she needs to be punished for her acts of wanting to cheat. A legal separation for 3 to 6 months would scare her if she loved her husband. She would need to find another place to live.

Poor ending.It would have been nice to find out Isabel's intentions,was she looking for a one night stand?.

Her own words; "I'm afraid that if Oscar Broman had got knowledge of my problems, he had done his best for taking advantages of the situation" tell us that she knew who wanted her and that he was the first man she thought of as a lover. They are still together but I wonder for how much longer.

Weakly written. Poor flow for the story. Very juvenile plot and ending.

Also, this is the Loving Wives category. This should go into Non Erotic or another site altogether.

Wish you would of continued with a part 2 or consider a revised story. This story had all that a reader needed. With that said the follow up could of been clearing the unknown details, while your reader would have time to emotionally adjust to the inner thoughts of everyone in this story. I also believe the husbands thoughts someone else was now made the interest of his wife could of been another man other than the married coworker? Somehow there has to be back and forth emotional conflict. Surely this faithful wife had already psychology cheated? This was left on the table to me you did it on purpose

Good story, but too short and quick ending. No physical damage to Oscar.

The story may have been okay, but I could not get past the horrible grammar and even more atrocious editing. I had to stop reading. It seems to me that a translation program was used to go from either Swedish or Norwegian to English and the editor must have also been a non-native speaker of English.

@russ603:

Yup, translation program must have been used for even such a dolt geezer like russ603 could realize that.

Anyway, not a bad story, pre-emptive as usual with winterfrog and very good reasoning in regard to assessing the intentions. Too bad the story is not longer with plot going a bit further in wife's actions.

Ok. So wifey gets off scot free, and continues to work with the ex, who wants to fuck her?

Even the story, as hard as it was to understand, pointed out that if she REALLY believed he cheated on her, she would have cross examined his friends, and her girlfriend. When he stood up to her, she dropped the whole thing. Now... one thing I have learned about the female population, they do not easily forgive and forget. So this does not make sense. Unless....Wifey was looking for an excuse to fuck her ex, and figured she would throw out the accusation, and see what stuck.

I guess this is a pun, but there is “ something rotten in Denmark”. 3 stars.

The plots of stories like these really require a bigly suspension of disbelief.

It was ok as far as stories like this go...but they really border on the preposterous.

dumb!!!!! first Caterine is single then twice ? divorced. Who sues and wins for rumors?

Nope, divorce. Seems he has no problem with her disrespect and mistrust.

Should have told her that threats,with out proof had ruined their marriage and whilst there would be no divorce because of the kids,she is now a lodger in the home.

Doesn't even make sense. Pretty sure the husband is a controlling a-hole.