All Comments on 'Demands on Him Ch. 03'

by latenightkiss

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
LordHimerosLordHimerosover 8 years ago
WOW this is nice.

I am really digging the caring domination. Todd is clearly doing some hard domination. But at the same time he's really affectionate and seems enamored by his lover's beauty.

I don't know if it's your thing but i'm just asking you very nicely to give tale a sweet romantic ending. Maybe he catches his fiance cheating and it drives him into his boss's firm but loving arms. *sigh*

Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Caring Domination?

I don't know what that first reader is smoking, or all those from the first two chapters. The boss is a sleazy predator. He is abusing his position and literally fucking up this guy's life. This is not single man. Not just some lonely introvert from the health club who needs his world rocked. He has a fiancee. He is an employee. Boss man strikes me as a serial offender. He is too smooth for this to be his first victim.

This is well written, but essentially noncon, as baby boy has little way to fight back without losing job and fiancee. But, he never said the word no and is now taking cock like a champ, so all is good, right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes

You just made my day. I love this series so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Like the first commenter said, I want it to end with a romantic ending too. I want him to leave his fiancé. I want them both to fall in love with each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
loving it!

Hey I really loved this story. Can you please update it .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Because I openly admit that I am a cum loving cock sucking fagot whore, most would say I am very submissive. I just get my pleasure from pleasing the man I am with. I have never begged to suck a cock or be fucked. I let the man know what I want by my actions. I do always thank the guy after we have finished having sex.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous