All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 12'

It is a delight to have another chapter in the tale of Jhardron and Aylanna. As well written as always but i doubt i will never get used to the American drug for dragged ah well a common language.

I love the way this story continues to grow, along with the development of your characters. I'm so glad you have posted another chapter at last. Thank you! I hope we'll see more soon!

Another great chapter! I could easily loose myself in the story! Keep em coming please! I cant wait to read this amazing saga.

enhance the depth of your story. I appreciate that you have the main characters confronting the gravity in leadership decisions and the weight they carry away on their consciences.

Too often adventure stories give short shrift to the nameless victims. They fall like so many cowboys and Indians in a TV western. I'm glad that's not the case here.