by Xantu
Its been great, slow paced but now its just turning sappy.
JC
U wrote beautifully and detailed emotions of the various characters are expressed wonderfully. U doing good!
I look forward to every chapter of this story and was ecstatic to see a new chapter. Keep them coming!
Many approbations on your weaving of your tale. Please endeavor to besottle us with more mead at your earliest leisure.
I was so thrilled to find this story this evening. And I love the way it is continuing. Your gift for description is very apparent here - I feel like I can almost see and feel the changes in the environment.
Thanks so much for continuing to share your gifts with us!