by MagicaPractica
I enjoyed this a great deal--so much so that I wish there was more to read. Please consider more writing along these lines, even after Halloween has come and gone!
I enjoy your writing style and the story was interesting as well. It was right up my alley! I do agree with the last comment...I wish there was more! The last bit was satisfying though so it wasn't as if it needed more, I just really enjoyed it. :D
We'll written, and engaging. I can't wait to see what comes next!