All Comments on 'Demon Whorehouse Transformation'

Shades of William S Burroughs. You have a real gift for description. I almost want to quibble about the characters (they're more ciphers than anything else) but there's so much energy in the climax it seems like nitpicking. And who's to say you couldn't write a sequel? Like a sexy version of Hellraiser (which was pretty sexy in parts anyway).

I'm usually not into the horror-type stories, but this is great. Ive read your other stories too, which were very good also. Thats why i decided i might as well give this one a try, and im glad i did! You should definetly cOnsider a part 2, although the ending was great

I happened upon this story from your blog, and am very glad I am. I will be reading your other works soon.

Would love a follow up for this one

This kind of writing makes me want to rip and tear. 5 stars. Well done indeed.