All Comments on 'Demonic Partnership Ch. 04'

Nazis in WW1 ? At least attempt to do some research. And get someone to proofread it for you. There is a good story in there somewhere but the constant deluge of spelling mistakes and basic grammatical errors makes it almost impossible to get through.

Your comment is appreciated and I realised after it was submitted that I made that mistake as Germans were known as the bosh in WW1 and didn't become nazis until WW2 I will own up to that mistake. The spellings you are probably referring to are the uk spellings for those words.

bruv ur story is whack!!!. out of all the stories I have read on literotica.com urs is d worst .. as in too whack.. full of bullshit bro..

Your comment is appreciated, my stories aren't everyone's favourite and it was written several years ago when I didn't know how to write stories that read right.