All Comments on 'Demonic War Ch. 03'

by warnos

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realusmctazmanrealusmctazmanover 4 years ago
Thank you

This was an excellent series. Thank you for sharing it, and your own story. Keep writing and please do another like it. JT

DarkmantimDarkmantimabout 5 years ago

great story have you thought about an epilogue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What language are you writing in ?

The words are English but not in the right order or tense and half the time the sentences make no sense at all. I gave up.

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