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Whackdoodleabout 9 years agoAwkward, stilted and painful to read.
I wanted to like it but it was difficult to read when the POV changed frequently or the cadence didn't match the flow of conversation.
Keep writing and you'll improve but if I may make one suggestion, stop playwriting other novels, characters and monsters.
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