All Comments on 'Demon's Punish Ch. 03'

I thought this chapter was pretty good and I am also glad Angie didn't explode. Love your work mate.

I got depressed when no one commented on this chapter and it's rating was below the previous 2. I thought I wouldn't care, but it did. Not sure why I care more about comments then I do about ratings, but I'd rather have 3 comments and a 3, then a 4.8 and 0 comments.

Thanks anonymous person! You made my entire month!

I wonder if people would like to see more crazy shit that's unknown or a quicker resolution? I hit a branching point here where Gideon could run and succeed at hiding away, he could run and get caught, or he could stay and fight and get caught. I'm siding towards having him run and hide, but I dunno. I keep playing out all three scenarios in my head and see values to each.

Also, I'm torn about switching from 1 single perspective (Gideon, extremely limited on what the hell is going on) to a more traditional, multi-perspective.

I suppose I'll never got any answered because most people who will read this have already read it, but if you ever wonder why I haven't put out Chapter 4 yet, those 2 issues sum it up.

I've just recently stumbled upon your work and I must say, I thoroughly enjoy your work! I beg you please don't stop writing!! I promise I'll post to every chapter if that helps? 😯 Looking forward to reading your next post!

I never thought I'd get so much enjoyment out of hearing people's comments, but it is a huge boost.

DP and 2LS will entertwine, I wasn't sure about releasing chapter 4 until people could appreciate the good Mason who is about to wreck Gideon's life. I also was on the fence about how the man hunt would go.

And it gets crazier! I got the final cast of characters for a series called "Two Lost Keys" and so this stuff is almost the prelude to a longer crazier arc. DP was also my experimentation with no POV switching, which is really ducking hard... But I think I'm better for it.

Whatever is causing this crazy amalgam of imagination, nightmares, andhallucinations drives you mad. This is really inventive. And addictive

BTW I think I'd like a multilateral point of view ( in response to your question)

One of the challenges I had was that in Chapter 2 I think I killed off the wrong girl. I have not been happy with the personality of Lavinia. Also I've been toying with how to combine this story world with the Two Lost Souls and several other works I've been slogging through over the past few years. Much of which hasn't been published on Literotica but has been written.