All Comments on 'Demonthorn Ch. 02.1'

by Ghostmambo

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sheanna23sheanna23over 7 years ago
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Repeat submission?

GhostmamboGhostmamboover 7 years agoAuthor

It was a repeat submission because the first version was deemed to be too graphic. I actually like this version better as it shows how much stronger Lora is and develops her character a lot more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sorry, but this is pathetic. It should be under nonconsent, not sci fi / fantasy. Your story isn't "forced," it's rape and gore.

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