All Comments on 'Demonthorn Ch. 11'

I really hope you write more!! I love your work. Great story line. I hope to see it finished.

Thank you all for your love of my story. I do not plan to leave you hanging, but all of my notes and drafts were on a computer that I no longer have access to, so I need to reconstruct them all, so I will probably not get the next Chapter up for a little bit.

Thanks for being patient!

I love the sheer brutality of some scenes followed by softness in others. The characters are multi-dimensional and leap out of the text as images in the mind's eye. My only criticism is that you can't write the next chapter fast enough!

So I know it has been a while since my last submission and I wanted to let you all know that I have not abandoned the story! I am currently transcribing the existing chapters and reconstructing my notes for the rest of the story.

You will all find out what happens to Jolie, Gortelesque, Lora and Kelli and get the sexy action you crave in the process, so just hold out a little longer!

Ghostmambo

(AKA the guy who writes this stuff)