All Comments on 'Demonthorn'

Very well written. Nice build up!

I wanted to say that this has been a whirlwind day for me in regards to the submission here. I also wanted to make sure that everyone knows that this is going to be a chapter story. As those who read were well aware, the erotic part of the story has yet to really take place!

So just be ready for a few chapters every couple of weeks as long as I can manage it and enjoy!

Very well written. Can't wait for the next part!

Sorry, rape will never be sexy - nor will it be a valid plot point.