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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very good !

***** top five star!Excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Standing Ovation

This story is a masterpiece. A must read. Five blazing STARS!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Lucky man, good guy

You are a lucky man if this was autobiographical-too bad it didn't work out like the story's end. Who knows, you may have fathered the 2nd Afro-American mixed race US President!

Licking from behind is one of my absolute favourite positions-great access and control. Story was not too "conquistador", physically realistic, and erotic without being crass.

Hasta la vista, Hotpup-Ah'll be beck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What a fuck and anal sex would have spiced up the thing.Kausik Dutta

What a great story. A hot anal sex with Anna would have spiced up the plot.

Kausik Dutta,Kolkata

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Always ready to have a hot time with other hot people. Just looking for a fun time! Midwestern US guy loves all kinds of ladies (young-old, thin-SSBBW, all races). Into kinks - no BDSM except light bondage and submission. I am a dirty grandpa!