All Comments on 'Denise's White Underpants Ch. 01'
by Paradiggler
- 7 Comments
von_bayrosover 6 years agoReally a great writing, like all your stories.
Please don't wait with part 2 too long
Anonymousover 6 years agogreat story line,but I found the writing too clinical. All the complete clinical names of the anatomy seemed to draw away from the story line
hairysurferover 6 years agoLove your style of writing and use of vocabulary; you describe almost exactly my own fantasies and I like the way you put them in such a realistic context. Looking forward to the next instalment when I hope you get to watch her defecate right in front of your face.
chimpeeabout 6 years agowe him and Denise to contiue this dirty dirty story.Peeing pooing licking each others dirty holes and undies and licking her tampons and having one slid up him
More more more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease
oldpantythiefover 2 years agoTo each his own. I found it kind of a turn on, to a point. Sucking a shit covered thumb was a little over the line with me, but like I said, to each his own. I did find it kind of funny the wide range of names used to describe what Denise was wearing under her dress, i.e. underpants, knickers, undies, panties and any others I may have missed. To most of us it's always panties. Anyway, I'm on to chapter 2 to see how much more depraved these two can get.
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