All Comments on 'Dental Visit'

One does need some distraction when visiting a dentist..thinking about this one will do. Nice dream, thanks!

LOVE IT! No long drawn out build up. Hot & vivid... sexy as hell!!

This is fantastic, very hot to imagine and definitely something I've fantasized about. The only change I would make would be to provide a little more physical description of your sexual suitors, in addition to more details to flush out the story. Your story has a nice pacing, nice build up, 4.8/5!