All Comments on 'Dentist Appointment Leads to Wild Sex'

When home love to eat her after they were done with her. Would love to be fluffed at next get together, they could even use me if they want. YUM YUM YUM

There are tons of punctuation issues. I had to go and re-read several sentences which takes away from the story. The storyline was good. If you edited it, it would be a 4 star. Sorry..only 2

God get a life,Good story, hot,,Just read and enjoy in the furure

The premise and story were hot. If there had been punctuation, especially quotation marks, and better grammar this would have been a 4 or 5 star story. However the grammar errors and lack of punctuation make it only a 2-star story.

add me to the cum cleanup. two loads would be great.