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by danmeaks

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NakedinNCNakedinNCover 13 years ago
Interesting, good be better

I like the set-up, but the action later is not really believable. Also, too much action with too many participants makes your story "jumpy". I suggest in the future you spend more time developing and then delivering the scenes.

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