by DaktoRto
I enjoyed following this series immensly.
You had a little time finding your voice, but you did an admirable job.
As a previous reviewer said, it started slowly, but picked up in intensity, the sheer eroticism carrying everything along with it. I enjuoyed it a lot.
Write more!
what can I say! wonderful, beautifully depraved fucking and sucking, oh that I could be enjoying something like this. More like this please lots more
After guiding us through all those amazing episodes, you still have lots of room to continue. The players are not at all worn out yet. Interestingly you introduced breast feeding at the very last sentence. You might capitalize on that subject? Breast milk is a mental and emotional stimulant for almost everybody. Lactating breasts can be used as a power tool to be used on others, i.e. the promise of amazing sex with milk, and as a sign of submission when maybe a person, or persons walk into a room, she automatically opens her top exposing herself knowing there are certain things she must do.
Just a thought or two. Excellent work!!!
This is not what you want but this was an interesting story. Chapters 5 and 6 were note worthy. I would truly enjoy a mini-novel based on those two chapters.
5 stars. Brilliant. Great to read a story where the men don't have huge cocks.