All Comments on 'Deprive Me of My Senses'

by Phils08

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not enough Sensory Deprivation

Your story seems to be based around sexual hunger rather than sensory deprivation.

I may be doing you a disservice because the lack of deprivation made me stop reading quite quickly.

Why (if the two are already relating) do you not start the story by preparing for his arrival by depriving yourself of sight speech and leaving yourself only limited movement. You could also have denied yourself hearing BECAUSE he has the key that lets him enter and take charge of your mind and body.

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