All Comments on 'Derek's Story Ch. 03'

Can' wait for more to come!

I just want more to read about Derek.Why Kara horrified and eveything else. But really great story. Keep it up.

sounds like kara was assaulted or someone is atleast threatening her

I am really enjoying this series! Can't wait to read more

Keep it going, please. Great story.

I don't like the fact that he said he's in love with kara but at same time is kinda going out with Janelle. .. Like really that's what u do to the person that your so called in love with...

When are the new chapters coming out I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next for Derek and Kara

excellent work please continue this story has me enraptured

"I felt my organism starting to build"

Derek is a prick. He should had stayed and let Kara explain why she couldn't say she could be exclusive with him. Instead he is out there fucking some other girl.