All Comments on 'Desert Nymph Domination'

No build up, confusing direction, and all around rushed feeling

Poor writing.

Really disgusting behavior - not a male chauvinist, a sicko.

There are good and bad and interesting and dull stories as any endeavor like Literotica is bound to have, but have you no quality standards? There were zero reasons to expose this truly ugly mess.

in all stories there should be a beginning, a middle and an end

this seems to be an over compensation for something you are missing or that happened to you in your life

so, he raped someone that he supposedly beat? did they fight? where are they from? what did she do wrong? was he just a horny asshole? she was raped and passed out, the end, boring as hell with little to no imagination

yawn!