All Comments on 'Desert Rat'

In those days there was no Pill. And I'm not sure if rubbers existed either. It would have been a bit more erotic if Lucy had feigned innocense about how babies were made and had accidently gotten pregnant by the desert rat.

I didnt really like the writing but the story could have been better too.

It was so sweet. I think it all happened a little fast, but otherwise it was great.

I loved the story. It would of been better to describe the two characters. But all in all good story. I'm glad Desert Rat killed the drunk father.

best story ever perfect!