All Comments on 'Design House'

by destinie21

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Rudy JamesRudy Jamesover 19 years ago
Simple but effective

Yes yes yes...I think we, the readers, are in for a treat with you. Good writing all along, with characters formed almost to perfection...Personally, I do like longer stories more, instead of writings that come to an abrupt end. But don't let that bother you. These are your stories, so you do with them as you please. As long as you can make them swirve along like you do, it's fine by me...

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great writing

great writing, i really would like to see what happens to them next. something long term maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great!

Loved every word. I am hoping though that there will be something more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
love your storyvery sensual

Hi Destiney veryy well written with a very loving senual erotic love scene, Keep up the great writting, again thenk you Johmn & Kona my email if you care to respond johngarilli@verizon.net

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what to say.....

i loved it it made me cum twice!!!! love it!! make more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More!!

You're a brilliant writer and I've read your two previous stories. I've also noticed that its been a long time since you last wrote. Why?? Looking forward to a lot more work from you. Scarlett2120

fingers46fingers46almost 12 years ago
Running out of compliments,this brilliant

Shame its fiction,I wished I`d worked for a boss like this,but sexy females dont work in steelworks or at least not where I was,

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago
Wow!

Please tell me there's more...

GeraldineLustGeraldineLustover 9 years ago
Amazing story.

Keep it up! I was hoping there's chapter 2 for this...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely Loved it.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 1 hour ago

Smile … easy flowing enchanting tale, great work ….. and the girls, urgent needs and obligatory something …. 🎉

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