All Comments on 'Designated Driving'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Pavlov

Pavlov's dog. She is training him.

naughtywriter2naughtywriter2almost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I agree! I wanted to write a story with a man's POV. I enjoyed writing this story very much. So glad you enjoyed it.

stormbreyerstormbreyeralmost 9 years ago
Great job

You did a great job of writing from a man's perspective.

I enjoy your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A small editorial suggestion

You mentioned she never let you take her backdoor but later you say she knew how much you like to see an analysis creampie like you do it all the time That stood out to me... You could fix it be saying she knew how you like seeing cum following our of her pussy. Also you mention fingering her ass before, do women who think anal is dirty and never do it really get off on anal play...

Other than that a fun romp. Keep writing.

ArchieWalthamArchieWalthamover 8 years ago
Public Service Message

This is as good an advertisement for getting a designated driver as I have ever seen.

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