All Comments on 'Desire'

more, there has to be more, right! that was really good until i realised there wasnt anything else, good luck to you! sopharoones

Please I agree let there be more...this cannot be the end....

That was such a great read!

I don't know how you packed that much suspense into such a short story, but bravo! Really well written.

Incredibly well done! Lovely writing, I hope to read more in the future.

Yes, a great job of packing loss, regret and sorrow into a blanket of lust, fulfillment and closure. You deserve the accolades!