All Comments on 'Desire'

I like this story, but Lorna's quite a brat. I realize she's only 20, so there's a lot of growing and maturing to do. I'm curious to see how and if her relationship with Greg changes her.

I'm more interested in reading the next chapter. Sounds a very interesting story. Thanks for sharing.

The only thing consistent about the characters in this story is how inconsistent Lorna is.

-- KK in Texas

Thanks again for the "early warning" email! It has taken you some time but it was really great to read, what promises to be, another intriguing love story from an outstanding exponent of the English (and I mean English) language. I will withhold further comments until I have read the final chapter! Best wishes, Pete.

AN EXCELLENT START TO AN EROTIC STORY. LACKING ONLY SEX BUT I AM SURE THAT WILL COME IN THE NEXT PART TO THIS WELL WRITTEN STORY.