All Comments on 'Desire Incarnate'

You feel like you are in the jungle... Just a great story, so well written, so well told, Just a masterpiece!!! Thanks for sharing!!!

One of the very best stories I've read on Literotica. Beautifully crafted with erotic tension building up from the beginning and ending with gentle sweetness. I hope ChancesAre writes more for what I believe will be a large audience of devoted readers.

You have crafted a wonderful story!

You have managed to spin a tale more sensuous than the the artwork described could possibly have been. The entire experience drew me in to depths I have never felt in any other piece!

I gave you six stars, but they kept taking one back. I was as exhausted by the end as Ben was, being held on edge for the longest time, but also a very pleasant time. Bravo

I was enthralled just like Ben. Thank you for your imaginative, sultry story. I haven't read anything else like that. Keep up the great work.

One of the best stories I have ever read, truly a work of erotic genius. It was lengthy with out being long, sultry without being withholding, and sensual without being cliche. The fact that you had multiple layers of nested narratives (Ben telling a story about Penelope telling a story about Crissy telling a story) and the writing never became confused or befuddled really speaks to your ability as a writer. Bravo

JUST. KEEP. ON. WRITING.

And we'll continue to jill out. :-)

Your stories are: 1. well written; and, 2. well engineered to maintain sexual tension throughout. Please do write more.

Masterfully written, this story elevates the short story genre; it has everything a reader could ask for.

Dear Author, Another WOW! Great story, loveable characters, unique concept. Very enjoyable read. Thank you for your effort. Will continue to explore your work for Lit. jntiques

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I wish there was a sixth star!!!

Mind blowing. Amazing how your story can be so powerful and.... there isn't even any sex.

I am very impressed with your choice of wording and the vision you paint with your words! Great Job!!!

You are always so steamy, and your scenes are so literate. I can actually see myself there.

You are always so steamy, and your scenes are so literate. I can actually see myself there.

If erotica were music, most pieces are like one musical instrument playing, or at best a few, with others heard in the background. In contrast, this authors stories are luxuriously imagined and crafted, lush with complexity and variety and surprise - performed flawlessly. They are sensual, sexual, symphonies.

Singular treats to be savored.

"They" say a picture is worth a thousand words. Then there's 3d pictures and virtual reality. This story is more like a kaleidoscope's virtual reality where each gem inside has a laser etching inside it.

As each piece moves, not only does the reader get a different depth of perspective of each piece, but the interactions of all those pieces. Well beyond the 5 stars, or 23K words you used.

An outstanding story. An exhilarating read .

Second or third read an still... Not sure how you get so many parts to come together to sound like a symphony - a great one, by one of the masters! Well done! Thank you.