All Comments on 'Desire on the Dance Floor'

Awesome story. Love watching chicks being naughty in the clubs. I take the wife out often and love to just sit back and watch her play with all the boys on the dance floor and at the bar. Five stars from me!

I enjoyed your description of the club and the condition/attitude of your female dancer. You wrote a very hot story.

I hope to read more of your stories, in the near future.

Both your stories are original and well written. I hope you keep writing.

I loved your description of the interaction between the three characters. I was able to follow the action in my minds eye.