All Comments on 'Desires Exfoliated Ch. 02'

wow, 2nd part is highly erotic

If you read submissions of other Indian WACC writers,this one is just like the others.

this author being a mother it makes me shudder what apig.

Should stick with sex with his elephant.

This is a VERY erotic story! Don't know if the author is really from India or not, but if he is then they have hot women there. Maybe because the country is so ancient and sex is celebrated in religion a true loving wife can only be fully explored by Indian writers.

Fucking cheating whore slut skank wife.

From canine with love!!!?absolutely fantastic.more conversation pls.

Lack of ability doesn't stand in her way.

it would be great to see her impregnated by raj.

she should begin to wear what he wishes and become his sex pet.

if people think about the language then they should write a story of their own and share it. stop being a parasite. i dont believe there is any wrong language or major grammatical errors in it. apart from a few commas and periods. ethically, being a critic and criticizing someone are 2 different things. i think people should 'OBVIOUSLY' know that.

This is one of the hottest stories. Please continue.

This author has set up an excellent scene. He/She must continue.

loved it

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