All Comments on 'Desires within Young Girls Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More of the same

I feel I've read this story over and over again. Daughter just turned 18, Mom's away, Daddy lusts, daughter teases then allows him to fuck her. We needed more pages to this story. Good start but ended too soon.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
She said it

She sad it: Your stories are no fun!

I told myself I wasn't going to read anymore of them because they suck, but I did hoping that you would find some writing skills.

Check out other writers such as _Lisa_ she is a great writer.

ammomanammomanabout 10 years ago
TEASING...

and terriffic. Well written, captures one's imagination, and is lustful. Please continue. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

You made me cum !! And it was rather a tame story too. Just a bit of humor and so well written. Cute. Thanks for the fun story.

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