All Comments on 'Desperation Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
is it just me

or did this one miss the theme as well...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
It's just you

The theme pretty much hits you over the head a couple of times in this one.

stlgoddessfreyastlgoddessfreyaalmost 9 years ago
Good Ending, Missing Build-Up

I enjoyed the overall arc of the story very much, but felt like it had too much Jaime and not enough of Natalie at the party, building from how uncomfortable she felt naked to the threat of the gangsters and the mutual attraction between Natalie and Brian that would have made the end really pay off.

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