All Comments on 'Destined Hearts'

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arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
Realy good read!

The introspection and passion....well done! Looking forward to reading on.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

Nice start. He has no recollection of her? Did he ever give her his last name? Hmmm....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Have to echo the others

This is too good a story line to let it die so soon. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Where is Chapter 2??

Best thing i have read in a LONG time, You HAVE to make a chapter 2, it just wouldn't be fair if you didn't...

tafxkztafxkzover 18 years ago
good foundation

my mnd is making up the rest WOW

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I want more!

please give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Please Continue

This story was sooo good, please write a 2nd chapter, I'll be looking for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What!

I'm sitting here searching like a mad woman for part 2! I was hoping at the end he would call her by real name... Argh!! Gimme more! Great job!

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 18 years ago
Wonderful romantic start

I agree with the other comments. Can't wait for chapter 2.

sacksackover 18 years ago
talk about cliffhangers....

will look forward to the next installment......

LadyFalconLadyFalconover 18 years ago
MORE!!!!!!! SOON!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

OMG.......you have got to write a 2nd chapter.....at the very least finish the night......please!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Chapter 2???!!!

There needs to be a chapter 2, I really liked this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
aaahh!!

No! no no no... you can't leave me hanging like that. It's just not fair! I really loved everything I read and I hope that you continue it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sexy and romantic.

Well-written, nice details, sweet story.

Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
absolutely loved it

Very lovely story. Can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out who she really is. Hope you're able to update soon.

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