Destined Lovers Ch. 01

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Henry got so angry that someone a stranger had entered his room without his permission that he went to the boy and asked him what he was doing in his room with anger in his voice. He could see that the boy was frightened as he turned around. When Henry saw his face, his anger turned to surprise. It was the boy he was always dreaming of, the boy who made his dick hard with just thoughts in his mind and now he was in his house. He could never forget that face. When he told him that he was working in his house, Henry's heart had jumped with joy and he was smiling at the boy and he looked at him and the boy looked down.

Henry had reminded the boy where and the incident they had met and the boy had apologized for it. After that both, of them could not say anything. Henry was feeling so happy that his dick started getting hard and he was afraid that the boy would notice. He thanked his stars that the boy had excused himself and left or else he would have been embarrassed and he would have drowned in his own shame.

Now he is at his office thinking about the boy again and he had a huge smile on his face. And then he began to think.

"Has destiny brought the boy to him? Does this mean that they will be together? Or was life playing games on him."

He wondered while smiling and then it hit him, "what if the boy was not gay?"

But he did not care. All he knew is that he had to get close to him. He had an idea that would bring him closer. Once he got home, he would tell Claire to assign the boy to be taking care of Henry's room and assist Henry around the house. Then he would be taking the boy with him at every chance he got and who knows the boy might fall for him but he hoped he would not mess up or that would be the end of everything

This was a great plan and Henry could not wait to get home and put his plan in action so he decided to phone the house and tell Claire what to do. He was very excited and he could almost see both of them cuddling in his bed.

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This is the end of chapter 1. Chapter 2 will be in very soon and it will be very interesting and romantic. Hope you like this chapter too. Comments are welcome and you can suggest what you want to be in chapter 2.

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o2byoungo2byoungover 6 years ago
Literotica seriously needs another catagory

After reading "Forever Yours" I knew I had to go back and read this one. I am gay, and I particularly enjoy stories that have a great plot with a little sex thrown in for the flavor.

I think Literotica needs to add a new catagory: "Gay Romance" as some of my own writing would also be better there. I get very bored reading one sex scene after another.

I agree with another com-mentor that you really need to do a better job proofreading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great plot so far. I have no suggestuons about that. If you dont have a good plot thats easy to follow, you dont hve a good story. Cant wait to read on how it develops.

Needs a rape warning for some.

Needs an editor or at least a thorough revision before posting. It seems some words were changed by autocorrect (ex: you said he drove a priors vs a Prius)

For the love of god, when typing a conversation, keep the words of one person in the same paragraph. Individual lines of quotes usually indicates different people talking. I dont know how much Literotica alters the format when submitting.

Ex. "I've never wanted to kiss you so badly," Paul said to Marcus "but people are around and this part of town isn't so friendly to male relations."

"You're right," Marcus replied "so let's hurry up and finish our business here so we can get home."

"Hell yes. I love you." (Paul responding)

"I love you too." (Marcus responding)

**You're already 8 chapters in so this advice might be irrelevant to you now.

63lsmith63lsmithabout 7 years ago
VERY NICE

Excellent start, I will be looking forward to more chapters. Even without any sex in this chapter, I still gave it 5 stars. Yes it was that good!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

It's great, and I love that it is romantically driven, however I need some better physical descriptions!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love story

I second the love story idea -- keep Henry and George exploring and learning about each other! George really deserves a break from his uncle! And Henry seems to be a kind and gentle lover!

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