All Comments on 'Destined Lovers Ch. 03'

WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, I LOVE A SLOW BUILT UP, BUT IT'S TIME

FOR THE MATING OF THESE TWO, LOVE BIRDS...

I have been reading your story since Chapter 1 and have to ask, Do you plan to have George open up to Henry about the abuse from his uncle? Another question that comes to mind from this chapter is, will they talk about George being attacked and almost raped? I just feel that the characters don't know enough about each other to express the level of love they have, attraction is clear, lust is clear but not why they are in love when they hardly know each other .

I really like stories with some romance ahead of sex. We've gone through three chapters and these two haven't gotten off yet (unless they cummed in their underwear) - but I'm sure it's gonna happen soon. I know from experience what kissing can do to male sex organs!

you need an editor. loving the story line. gay love ., i use to read stories on here all the time ,but stopped for a year cos of nasty comments from users ,who didn"t like my polite but truthful comments .spelling issues mixing up the guys names .take your time with this story stop rushing . many writers have rushed stories out to keep readers happy, if a story is worth reading , its worth waiting for . jonathan xf from the united kingdom