All Comments on 'Destroy and Rebuild Pt. 01'

Use your talent first to get off the primary mission - self exaltation and race frustration.

I only read part of the first page and it was apparent why your success to date has been limited. It isn't your talent is it - that is strong. You try to piss people off and you succeed to spite yourself.

Step back - get rid of the mission - get another theme and let most people enjoy what you could do. Otherwise, you waste space and time for most and yourself.

Please give it some thought.

Bag of shit the white man brought? look at Africa mud huts savages! White Man invented all that is good you dumb fuck

Phenomenal story. Powerful, nasty, intimidating and hot!

write English and keep your concepts together. Overall we have one overly self confidant egotistical bastard what will eventually wear a few lead rounds in his chest. The fact is he hasnt yet met a man and when he does he will suck cock with skills the best whore in town will smile at. This one almost sounds like a Hitler or Napoleon or maybe a stupid fool.