All Comments on 'Detective Happenstance'

I enjoyed the read, it kept me interested all the way through.

Awesome story. I hope you write a follow-up. Sophia's a mom with

a couple kids. It would be awesome to contrast her figure with the other

women in the massage parlor. Here's an idea: Most of the others are

college aged, but Sophie is actually 43, even though she looks about 27.

Both her kids have just finished college but mom & dad are in debt 45k from it.

The small kids at her house were from occasional baby sitting.

She was wearing a bra on that first massage visit by the author, hence only

was nipping when she got very excited. After her session with her

neighbor, and with some encouragement from the parlor manager,

the next time she skipped the bra and wore a thinner tank top.

Over the next few weeks, she learned that skimpier tops meant bigger tips

from all her clients.

The author was a heavy tipper, especially after an unexpected windfall

inheritance from a rich great-uncle, to whom he was the only living

relative. When asked, Sophie admits to the author on his fourth visit

that she had given the "extra service" to one other man after him but the

experience turned out bad -- he was an obnoxious kid who

pressured her for sex after the hand jobs. So Sophie decided to restrict

herself to G-rated massages, except for her one special client. With time,

and after tons of compliments, he convinced her to massage him topless.

He absolutely loved the shape of her "mom boobs", as he called them.

They were soft enough and saggy enough to be able to assume all sorts of sexy

shapes as the dangled and jiggled above his face, far sexier than the

"high and hard" boobs of the younger other masseuses.

With his very generous tipping ($75 before the inheritance and

$375 after the inheritance), Sophie took possession of the Harley

a few months early in September. Her husband had a low-paying job

and she wanted to continue working, but she was afraid of hubby

finding out. It all became a moot point when her hubby won a gift

certificate for a massage (He'd filled out an entry form at the mall while

shopping for a gift for his wife). Needless to say, hubby got the surprise of

his life when his own wife came in to massage him and she was

braless in a skimpy top that showed cleavage.

Sophie had given him the Harley only three days before.

They spent the entire hour working it all out. She assured him that it

was all legit and that all future money was going to their kids college

fund, and that she would use her work experience to find an even more legit

job at a medical clinic. Hubby had secretly been wishing that she would loosen up

and not dress so dowdy. When she finally asked him if he approved of her

continuing to work there, he said he'd give it a big thumbs up on

one condition -- if she would dress like that more often.

Over the last couple months, her hubby had kindled a friendship

with the author, which made him uncomfortable about hubby

possibly finding out. But short stories have a way of working out.

"Sophie" had a twin sister who was recently divorced from an abusive

marriage and had relocated 1500 miles to start over in her sister's town.

Of course, Sophie's hubby insisted on lining up a blind date with her and

his new friend. It was a double date and became a long-term relationship.

The author declined hand jobs after that, well, except for one last "thank you"

hand job that turned into a blow job on his last farewell visit.

The author knew it was his last

session and the tip was ten $100 bills.

With further encouragement from a much more worldly and

adventurous sister, Sophie even joined her twin and went topless at

the author's back yard pool. As hubby and author sipped their Pina coladas

and watched the two twins frolicking topless in the pool, hubby remarked.

"Just for the record, I know my wife jerked you off a couple times.

She admitted it to me. She also said you quit seeing her for massages

when you started dating Karen. So, full disclosure. We're even. I dated

Karen before Sophie and, well, yes hand jobs, but we didn't date

long enough for other things. She started college on the east coast

right after that, and the rest is history. Sophie and I have never been

much at keeping secrets. I just wanted to tell you, ah, full disclosure."

Author: "Anything else?"

Hubby: "Yes. Thanks. Thanks a lot for your good influence. All your

compliments and tips made a big change in her. She rarely ever

wears a bra anymore and she's never had such self-confidence as long

as I've known her."

Author: "Glad to help. And by the way, that stuff with Sophie, all in the past.

From now on, just friends, totally platonic. Just wanted you to know too."

Hubby: "Platonic relationships can be nice. But, off the record, if you and

Karen ever have an interest in, well, shall we say, sharing? Well, enough said.

So, when you gonna make it official and marry my gorgeous sister in law?"

Anonymous, thanks for the extensive comment. It seems that you've already told the story, but I'll try to work some of the elements into something related in the future. Glad you enjoyed it, naturally, hope you'll check out my other stories!

Romancer is an accomplished writer, able to deftly craft his words into a readable, believable and erotic tale. While some may scoff at the speed in which the first masseuse accepted the 'extra' duties, the slow burn with the neighbor leaves plenty of material for future sequels. Good job!