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All Comments on 'Detective N.'

by InsaneMentality

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TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 9 years ago
Nice intro

Could use some help with punctuation, but I really liked the story. Looking forward to another installment.

robindavisfictionrobindavisfictionabout 9 years ago
Good

Looking forward to another installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More?

Good start, but now I'm wondering if the "case" is going to be solved, and how ...lol

jenellesljenelleslover 1 year ago

A new twist. Nice work.

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