All Comments on 'Detective Spring Ch. 05'

cliffhangers and now that you have me hooked it is even worse!!!! Grrrrrrr.

Get help with your writing!

what the other 'anony' is bitchin about?! I enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for sharing. I await the next chapter!

I think Arden and John are sent by the council to destroy the creatures that are hunting the girls because they are killing all the hybrids. Not them for being blood drinking wolfwomen/witches, That's my theory anyway oh and Arden has also discovered he is her mate and he is also one of her kind.

Longer chapters, even with longer gaps between posting would be better. Chapters this short are annoying when a story is good. It's jolting when it ends, frustrating and unsatisfying. If you double or triple the length, the chapter becomes something you can sink into, and you are satisfied during the wait.

It's "kneeling" and "breathe"