All Comments on 'Detention Desperation Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Say what?

Here I sit trying to figure out why I finished reading this totally unrealistic and sophomoric story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story

very nice but you should not have ended it at the best part when she finally pees

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I liked it!

I liked it and want to read about her next day!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I'll be looking forward to the continuation of this story. I liked it more than the Cruel School one.

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