All Comments on 'Detention with Mr. Davis'

by EricBanner

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curiousk75curiousk75over 14 years ago
OMG!

All of my favourite fantasies wrapped up into one HOT story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More Please!

This is the best story I've read in a long time. Perfect set up, great story line, the details and descriptions made me so hot! Keep it up. I'd LOVE to see another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
One of the best!

Damn my pussy is sooo wet after reading this! I loved all the teasing & the 'almost' climaxing as the story went on. Keep them coming! My pussy feels sooo good right now..I really needed that!

LeCoachLeCoachover 14 years ago
Good Stuff

Good story. Write some more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
oh my, oh my

I am so turned on right now I could scream!! That was very, very hot!! I want so bad to be Alison right now, my pussy is drenched. Definitely keep the stories cumming. If in fact you add another chapter to this one maybe bring in the Principal or the friend Jenny or heck both of them!

AlitheAlitheover 14 years ago
Awesome

I love teacher/student sex stories. Especially with male teachers and female students, because I'm a girl. It's hard to find them and sometimes they aren't very good, but this one was really nice!

madamwebmadamwebover 14 years ago
wow

Oh my God!

I loved Alison's character. How she went from innocent to naughty school girl telling Mr. Davis about her experiment in the shower.

And Goodness! The way Mr. Davis gets turned-on and starts spanking her!

I loved the flow of the story, the build up from detention to a sexy after school activity. A definite favourite. Well worth the read.

Please keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great!

wow! amazing story, it got my pussy so wet.

DelicoseDelicoseover 14 years ago
More! Please, more!

This has the makings of a good series. Please, continue.

dolly_tartdolly_tartabout 14 years ago
Awesome

A great read!!! I loved it. Please make a series out of this!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
AWESOME

this is the best!

SugarBunnySugarBunnyalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful

This really has been I think my favorite erotic story so far. I love your writing style. I didn't check how old this story is or if you are still writing but could you do one with a girl and a salary man? preferably a nerdy computer programmer? It has always been my biggest fantasy to be a guys 'lap top' ya know? heh.

LegittiusLegittiusalmost 14 years ago
awesome

Truly a great story.. just enough detail and yet the story kept flowing... I knew I should have gone into teaching

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

WOW... that story was amazing... it wasnt too much sex in one section and it kept you wanting more! GOOD JOB!

Lady_GaladrielLady_Galadrielalmost 13 years ago

my panties are so wet. this was a very, very good story. love all the anal action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
mmmm

so horny my panties are dripping wet

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story A+

Loved it read it in 2 parts

we need the cock in this sweet young cunt

lucky mr davis

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wonderful!

Great story! I hope you will write more. I wonder if Principal Victoria really did not notice anything...

PhilliesGirl51PhilliesGirl51over 11 years ago
Just like my fantasies!

What an amazing story! Please, please write more about these two! ;)

bseeker6969bseeker6969over 11 years ago
Waiting for 2

Looking forward to another chapter for this one. I would hate to see it take 3 yrs like Cancun Candids :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow

This might be the hottest story I've ever done. Excellent!

LeCoachLeCoachalmost 9 years ago
Good story

Honestly! The little tart deserved to be sodomized while still wearing her hot little panties!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Best ever

I would love to be a teacher with a student this willing to share her newly shaved cunny with me. She is so naughty but you can sure tell she likes to pay with a big penis and make it ooze in her hands.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot as hell

That was the best story I’ve read.

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