All Comments on 'Devil May Care Ch. 06'

Only 2nd time posting to a story in MANY years of reading. Been reading 'Fantasy and Science Fiction' magazine even longer. This story could easily be published - a little less X and more NC-14. Humor, nerd references, social commentary. Good work.

I'm a fan of DMC and the "Disunited Front" universe. Gonna be returning to it in a few stories.

Great writing, if you publish please post it.

Here~ http://www.amazon.com/dp/B07CG23CWC

good one. I liked your steam punk novel too but forgot to comment as its lockup and i'm on a reading spree. Continuing on and hope you also continue your contributions. But the schrodinger thing i couldn't even finish the first chapter. You mustave been on one hell of a withdrawal or hangover to write such a crap. Oh and thanks for publishing all your works here forr free.

That was really fun -thanks!

I confess I’ve binged this straight through and at different times I’ve laughed, been glued to the storyline, then I’ve just sat and wondered how in the fresh five hells you’ve managed to come up with such a mix that pretty much hits all my buttons. I’m not really sure if you meant it as such, but my favourite character was the Shockpod, the mental picture of him holding onto Marin in a depressurisation emergency grinning his head off truly made my day!

Many many thanks for both writing this and posting it here for free, cheers from the U.K., Ppfzz.

Though you, Purple!

If you liked the Shockpod, check out the sequel, Idle Hands: https://www.literotica.com/s/idle-hands-pt-01

Thank you. This was a very good story. Now I am going to find Idle Plaything.

Very fun and well written. Loved all the various references made. This put you on my fav authors list. 5/5

Now onto Idle Playthings!

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