All Comments on 'Devilish Little Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome

Great start!! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Take your time....

it's a good start (though been done before) and if you keep it sophisticated you'll have something-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice!

really liked it!

Please, you gotta continue this!

lwolf80lwolf80over 14 years ago
interesting story

Interesting story...... Like to see what happens next

silenceup2nogoodsilenceup2nogoodover 14 years ago
Good start

Though it could have used a bit more set up time. Build it up at the start with some suggestions as to why she'd now a demon. Then do the church scene in part 2. Over all a good job. Keep at it.

cannon350gcannon350gover 14 years ago
More please

Very hot!! Please give us more I want this to carry on. Like the description of anis some writers don't help you picture the scenes well enough. Good job keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
yes

I hope you do 200 sequels.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sick

thats disgusting lulz

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nothing out of it

It was a good story but I didn't really get anything out of it. I liked how the priest was a pedophile though. Funny good job

MasterLexi97MasterLexi97over 11 years ago
waiting

I'd really like part 2 to appear soon, I really want to see what is going to happen next

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Oh God I came so hard to this story I wish I could fucm my little sister

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 8 years ago
Lame.

If she could control people, why steal from them? Why not just have the surrender everything they have? And why have sex with the priest? Why not force him to rape a child, wouldn't that be despicably evil?

The problem with absolute power is that there is no challenge, there's no limit and without barriers, boundaries, something to fight against, there is no challenge.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

As usual, another UNFINISHED story.

strummer911strummer9114 days ago

I loved it. Please continue the story or write another one like it. I love how evil she is

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