All Comments on 'Devouring Samantha Ch. 01'

A wonderful and erotic story so masterfully written that the reader can feel the need and yearning of the two lover's. With that said, the reader is also distracted and aggravated by missing word, the use of wrong words and the lack of proper editing.

First of all...lovers*

Missing wordS*

Do try and practice what you preach. That said, i do love constructive criticism, please feel free to drop me a line about specific missing words or words you felt were improperly used. Finally, please note the foreword, where I indicate such editing errors may exist due to a rush job on behalf of the requesting party. Thank you for being a reader and taking the time to comment!

Excellent story...only gave it a 5!

As for the few typos, etc...it wasn't a problem, especially after you forewarned us. Guess some folks are too picky, too perfect!

Look forward to more! Keep up the great writing.

A great story, erotic and arousing, just the way I like them. Hope to see more.

Nice story with considerable heat. Would like to have this story on my blog. Let me know if you are interested.

So long as I'm properly credited and linked back to my profile on Literotica, you certainly have permission to use this. Thank you for being a reader!