All Comments on 'DEZ'

Wonderful story! This could also have been in Loving Wives as a great example of what those stories can be 🙂

I enjoyed the story, it flowed nicely. Please in the future, ask someone to proofread the story. You repeated nearly an entire paragraph near the beginning.

Nicely done story. I like the creation of Dez and Fetna as Christians. Not all, but some are sexy, too, despite some opinions to the contrary. Best of all, the husbands and wives love and respect each other. Good people are the sexiest and mean people suck...but not as well.