by elsasilk
now that we have established her true nature, we only need to discover how low she will sink.
and I hate when there are glaring errors to distract from reading the story.
" Heated oil dribbled on me just below my neck. It slid down and I gasped. The cold trembled over me in rivulets of oil."
which is it? hot or cold?
Oh wow I also am very turned on and wet right now. Fantastic story...looking forward to more of these people. Maybe the chuffer coculd get in on the deal..
I’d love to read this as a full length fast burn novel. It sounds sooo intriguing.
A nice push/pull from desire to the forbidden. Very suspenseful and teasing. I'd like to see this story continued.
FTDS. Very hot so far, but I hate a teaser. 3/5 because of the incomplete story.