All Comments on 'Diamonds in Cream'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mmmm

Made me wet.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
diamonds for sex

now that we have established her true nature, we only need to discover how low she will sink.

and I hate when there are glaring errors to distract from reading the story.

" Heated oil dribbled on me just below my neck. It slid down and I gasped. The cold trembled over me in rivulets of oil."

which is it? hot or cold?

EyetiegalEyetiegalover 9 years ago
Fuck that made me wet!

MORE PLEASE!!!!

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
****************** many stars I wanted to give you 5 stars above my finger slipped.

Oh wow I also am very turned on and wet right now. Fantastic story...looking forward to more of these people. Maybe the chuffer coculd get in on the deal..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
To Be Honest

I’d love to read this as a full length fast burn novel. It sounds sooo intriguing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A nice push/pull from desire to the forbidden. Very suspenseful and teasing. I'd like to see this story continued.

muskyboymuskyboy8 months ago

FTDS. Very hot so far, but I hate a teaser. 3/5 because of the incomplete story.

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